Native english speakers ! Is the sentence "It’s sad when people die and their families cry" correct ?

Is there any grammar erro ?

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    Not only correct but a very profound and original insight.

  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    With a period at the end, it's correct but it sounds childish.

  • 1 month ago

    As long as the full sentence will have some kind of final punctuation, yes, it's grammatically correct.

  • 1 month ago

    The sentence is OK grammatically but the rhyme (die/cry) makes it sound rather like a line from a humorous, jingle-like poem. If this is intended as a song lyric, you can overcome that with the music setting, but read as a prose line it sounds as if it's intended to be lines for a funny poem.

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  • 1 month ago

    it sounds okay to me

  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    No, the grammar is correct.

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