Native english speakers ! Is the sentence "It’s sad when people die and their families cry" correct ?

Question

Is there any grammar erro ?

Answer 1

Not only correct but a very profound and original insight.

Answer 2

With a period at the end, it's correct but it sounds childish.

Answer 3

As long as the full sentence will have some kind of final punctuation, yes, it's grammatically correct.

Answer 4

The sentence is OK grammatically but the rhyme (die/cry) makes it sound rather like a line from a humorous, jingle-like poem. If this is intended as a song lyric, you can overcome that with the music setting, but read as a prose line it sounds as if it's intended to be lines for a funny poem.

Answer 5

it sounds okay to me

Answer 6

No, the grammar is correct.