? asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 2 months ago

Is this sentence correct in English?

Travel agencies should be able to communicate to Millennials through the modern social platforms to inform them about what the advantage is of booking a trip in a more traditional manner. 

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  • 2 months ago
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    Understandable, but this edit will work better: Travel agencies should be able to communicate with Millennials through modern social media platforms, to better inform them of the advantages of booking a trip in a more traditional manner. 

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