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For the next ten years, I will try to live harder than I have never done before. I will try to make the best out of my responsibility so I am going to do whatever I can do for success.
- ZapataLv 61 month agoFavourite answer
Firstly, the concept of living "hard" is an awkward colloquialism. I presume you mean "more enthusiastically".
"...than I have never done before" is wrong. It is "than I have ever done before."
Add a comma after "responsibility."
Replace "for success" with "to achieve success."
- RPLv 71 month ago
Harder should be replaced by better or something like smarter and never should be replaced by ever. The second sentence is acceptable, but it could be improved by making it something like I will be a responsible person who does whatever is necessary for success.
- Land-sharkLv 71 month ago
Make the changes Zapata suggested, or consider using this:
Over the next ten years, I intend to take on more responsibility and try to work even more diligently in order to achieve success.