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 I am more focused on the present rather than the future. As I am getting order, it feels meaningless to me to think about the future.

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  • blank
    Lv 6
    5 months ago
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    May I suggest the following?

    I am focused on what happens in the present.  As I get older it seems pointless to plan for the future.

    Hope this helps.

  • Zapata
    Lv 6
    5 months ago

    This is fine, except that you have spelled "older" wrongly. You could possibly remove the word  "rather" as it is unnecessary here.

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