How to make these 2 sentences better?
--Here I used the word "after" twice, is that OK?:
Last year, after 3 years of study, I completed my x degree after a battle with x illnessx.
--Here I say "many protests every single day" , It sounds childish . How to say it? :
My city has been involved in many protests every single day since x until x when the virus entered my country. .English is my 2nd language.
- 3 weeks ago
If you want to avoid saying "after" twice, which is okay grammatically but could be improved, you could say "Last year, following three years of study, I completed my x degree after a battle with x illness."
And I would say "My city has seen daily protests since (date), when the first Covid-19 cases were reported."
- Chi girlLv 73 weeks ago
Last year, after three [spell out numerals] of study, I completed my x degree after winning a battle with [illness].
There have been many protests in my city . . . " since x until x" -- no idea what you want to say.