Survey: What do these sentences make you think of?

We sat by a tranquil green river, surrounded by shrubs and colourful flowers, appearing so charming beneath the summer's bright sunshine.

We were enjoying our time, listening to the melodious hymn of the birds, as the little fish tickled our bear feet in the water.

Update:

bare feet*

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  • Guber
    Lv 5
    1 month ago

    Going to the bathroom in the woods. No, really, it makes me think of pretty much what it says.

  • 1 month ago

    Both give a sense of relaxation and tranquility.

  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    It makes me think its language is tediously flowery, you have issues with dangling participles, no comma is called for before "as," a comma is called for before "green," you apparently don't know the difference between "bear" and "bare," you use British spelling instead of American, and I would sooner open up a vein and bleed out on the floor than read more.

  • CAB
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    Being mauled by rabid dogs for some strange reason.

    Are you supposed to be bears in this story? 

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