"Someone to fly away alongside?"?
Is it correct to say "I'm looking for someone to fly away alongside?"
If it's not, how can I rephrase this?
- MikeLv 75 months ago
I'm looking for someone to fly away with.
- blankLv 65 months ago
It is not really "wrong" to say "... to fly away alongside." Although "fly away" denotes leaving, departing - possibly dying.
Might consider something like:
I'm looking for someone to walk beside throughout life.
I'm looking for someone to shelter and be sheltered by all of the trials of life.
Ultimately - what ever you say, if it is sincere and comes from the heart - your meaning will be clear. More importantly you want a phrase that not only speaks to you - but touches someone in kind. So, "fly away" as you state - might just be a filter that helps you find that "one" heart with which to connect.
Not sure I have helped at all, but hope so.