abanti asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 4 months ago

A DEEP SILENCE......?

it reminds me of the feelings of spring,

a story of the love of a soft wind,

i was awake,

over all silence,

i feel the emotions,

when i reach on the moment......

i indicate the colours,

all come the same way,

the green grass,

that dry leaves,

showed me a deep silence,

with a dropless tears.....

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  • 3 months ago

    Memory is a great thing

    and one thing to surpass as well.

    This is a neatly penned softly. softly, contemplative - to - me, reminder..Thanks.

  • 3 months ago

    This poem is nice, I like this poem.

    Thank you.

  • Anonymous
    4 months ago

    Does this poem have a meaning?

    It seems you are trying to sound deep without giving any actual substance.

  • Anonymous
    4 months ago

    Wouldst I was a cater-piggle / Creepy-crawly waggle wiggle.

    Source(s): Walt Kelly
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  • Cogito
    Lv 7
    4 months ago

    What is that supposed to mean?  Why are you asking in Books & Authors?

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