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Can I get feedback on my Isekai comic?

This is the first chapter of my isekai comic. I'm also the illustrator so I understand it isn't in "proper script format" but I try to write it so other people can understand as much as possible.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Gnx-TEMJ10q_s...

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