Native English speakers, could you please me help me with these issues?

Are these sentences make sense:

a) "She ENRICHED at the expense of the state IN THE VALUE of 1 billion dollars."

b) "She ACCUMULATED WEALTH at the expense of the state IN THE AMOUNT of 1 billion dollars."

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  • 1 month ago

    She enriched herself at the expense of the state to the value of one billion dollars.

    She accumulated wealth at the expense of the state to the amount of one billion dollars.

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    1 month ago

    DO these sentences make sense!!

    a) She got rich at the expense of the state TO the value of...

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  • Anonymous
    1 month ago

    Enriched has to be transitive to make sense -  she enriched HERSELF

    You can say in the value, but more natural here would be 

    TO the value of... or TO the amount of.

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