melody asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 months ago

Does my poem have potential?

Can’t break out of my cloak of. Lies,

Can’t breathe, only choke, Green skies

In the water, to drown, seems a lullaby

Can’t seem to see anything anymore, Only green skies 

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    9 months ago

    NO Mildred!!..stop inflicting these terrible 'poems' on us day after day after day.. Find another hobby. for suck's fake!

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