Native speakers of English, could you help me with my English?
I need to translate a text but I'm not sure it sounds natural for English speakers as I'm not a native speaker. Do I need to make any corrections? I would appreciate any answers.
Since Frank Nowak, as the head of the nobility of the county of Lodz, agreed to act as a prefect during Napoleon’s campaign, he faced a great danger of joining the ranks of those most likely to be deported to Siberia.
- Anonymous8 months agoFavourite answer
Since Frank Nowak, as leader of the nobility in the county of Lodz, had agreed to act as prefect during Napoleon’s campaign, he faced great danger in joining the ranks of those most likely to be deported to Siberia.
- CharlesLv 58 months ago
It is fine. No problems.