How do I correct and make this sound Shakespearean poetic?
I’m a burning candle,
A deep sigh,
A shaking tear,
What have I done that made you be gone (flee)?
- Pat WoodenLv 74 weeks agoBest answer
My heart is a burning candle
A deep sigh
A shaking tear
What act of mine
Drove you away
I am lost
Without you near
- JOHNLv 74 weeks ago
Deep and sorrowful are my sighs,
Hot and searing are my tears,
As down the ridges of my visage,
They trembling trickle their way,
Draining my soul of its hold on life’s tenure.
What have I done, my love, that bid you
Be gone from me?
- 4 weeks ago
I am a burning candle, a deep sorrowful sigh, a trembling tear,
What have I done that made you flee so far from me, my dear?