Is it better in a book to write the plot where the girl commits suicide after being raped and the guy she loves avenges her ?
or that she survives, runs away with him after he kills the culprits?
- MarliLv 71 month agoBest answer
Is it the man's story or the girl's? If the man avenged her after she killed herself, the story is centered on the man.
Does the man love her because he discovers she is an attractive, charming, intelligent young woman or because she represents something he wants or lacks. (i.e. She symbolizes the oppressed nation he vowed to free. Or she is an innocent, "pure" maiden and possessing her love or her body would "heal" him so he can be pure.) Her rape maddens him to kill because the rapists have destroyed her purity. They have robbed him of his saviour, and her violated body reminds him of his failure to free their violated country.
In earlier versions of your story, he kept her to himself, in his bed, instead of taking her to her mother and her own bed. Why? It's "possessive" behaviour and she is shy, modest, little older than a child and afraid of him, which makes his keeping her to himself worse. Her mum has the right to undress and care for her. He usurped that and nearly touched
- bluebellbkkLv 71 month ago
Those are obviously two separate books. Write them both, but in heaven's name stop posting about them.
- AndrewLv 71 month ago
Enough with this obsessive nonsense about tragedy and revenge. Your contrived plots are rubbish and we're tired of seeing them spammed here every day. Either write this bilge or don't, nobody cares either way. But quit plastering it all over this forum. You've exceeded the maximum number of times that a person can ask about the same thing.
- TinaLv 71 month ago
Just write the book, if you want to. But stop asking questions about it, which won't help you.
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- 1 month ago
I think it's better to write the plot where the girl falls down a rabbit hole and eats things that make her really tall and really small and meets the Red Queen and the Cheshire Cat. But I guess that's been done already.
- Anonymous1 month ago
It's best to not write tripe.
- Anonymous1 month ago
BASED ON THIS INFORMATION IT WOULD BE BETTER IF YOU DON'T TRY TO WRITE A BOOK.