Feedback for Original Work: "Take My Hand! Please..."?

Will you tell me that you love me Just so I can run away? And the things you want to hear So I know just what not to say? Will you be my light in darkness I will use to blind my eyes? And the warmth when I am freezing So I burn myself alive? Be a shoulder I can lean on 'Til you crumple to the floor; Give me... show more Will you tell me that you love me
Just so I can run away?
And the things you want to hear
So I know just what not to say?
Will you be my light in darkness
I will use to blind my eyes?
And the warmth when I am freezing
So I burn myself alive?
Be a shoulder I can lean on
'Til you crumple to the floor;
Give me everything I wanted
So that I can ask for more.

I have lived not many years yet,
Still I've come to understand
Not to bear another's judgment
Who would choose to hold my hand.
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