How is my translation of what I written in Japanese?
The dead gods
The countless drowning flowers
Which floats on leaves
Musū no koshi hana
Ha ni ukabu
Details to kanji
薨去 - Death or demise (Noun and particle)
- BenLv 511 months ago
Is this supposed to be a haiku?
If so, you've got the meter wrong.
Your first line is six syllables ("kou" is two), and your second is eight ("suu" is two). Only your last line adds up.