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Our Homeland:🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳 There is no nation as glorious as our motherland-India Which is utterly Alluring and Exquisite Having Geographical features divergent and absolutely elegant. Like Mountain ranges like the snow-covered Himalayas in the north and the Nilgiris in the South. Or coasts like the Malabar and... show more Our Homeland:🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳

There is no nation as glorious as our motherland-India
Which is utterly Alluring and Exquisite
Having Geographical features divergent and absolutely elegant.
Like Mountain ranges like the snow-covered Himalayas in the north and the Nilgiris in the South.
Or coasts like the Malabar and Coromandal which are nothing less than sublime.
Our history is filled is filled with lustre and splendour;
Our Monuments Built with grandour
Like the Taj Mahal with Marble has been mold;
It beautifies our planet tenfold
Nowhere do we see this sort of passion and zeal
These are things to never conceal.
India is a land of legends and epics
Like the Ramayana and Mahabharata
If you don't know them....Then you're just pathetic.
Our country is home to Tagore a great soneteer
His work will be recalled for zillions of years.
A garden is filled with different types of flowers yet it's unity in diversity is what makes truly enchanting,and so is our country which comprises of races of different kinds yet we stand tall United and as one living with peace and harmony.
Every human wants to go to heaven once theyve met their end...Well thats where we aldready are...Our motherland is indeed paradise on Earth.

And of course a very happy Independence day 🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳
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