I'm Japanese and studying English as a second language.?

Are the following English natural? 1-1 Drinking too much is bad for the health. 1-2 I asked her who was the man wearing a white hat. I think followings are more appropriate : 1-2. Drinking too much is bad for YOUR health. 2-2. I asked her who the man wearing a white hat was. Please let me know your opinion. show more Are the following English natural?

1-1 Drinking too much is bad for the health.
1-2 I asked her who was the man wearing a white hat.

I think followings are more appropriate :

1-2. Drinking too much is bad for YOUR health.
2-2. I asked her who the man wearing a white hat was.

Please let me know your opinion.
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