Best Answer: Doesn't sound right. It is also a fragment. Presumably you have provided a bit more in the preceding sentences. Not exactly sure what you are trying to say, but I guess it is something like this:
"However, all this came at grave cost, for which Hamlet paid with his life, poisoned as the king had been."
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It must be "the one who took", not "the one whom took".
The concepts swept up into your sentence are very complex, and would probably make sense only in the context of your whole article.