Would anyone be willing to read (a least a portion) of this story?

It's an early draft, I so am more concerned about feedback on the story itself. "An orphan at seven years old, Bridget has some peculiar quirks. She loves autumn nights, reads classic literature, and is a little obsessed with death. When someone from her past returns and she begins to experience... show more It's an early draft, I so am more concerned about feedback on the story itself.

"An orphan at seven years old, Bridget has some peculiar quirks. She loves autumn nights, reads classic literature, and is a little obsessed with death. When someone from her past returns and she begins to experience supernatural phenomenons. "

http://figment.com/books/1053104-Nycto


Thank you much :)
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