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D'Alucci wrenched his arm free from beneath the woman's bulk and scrabbled above his head for the bell cord. "Excuse me," he muttered. "This is my stop."
The woman ignored him.
D'Alucci repeated himself, his voice edgy and annoyed.
The woman slowly turned her head towards him. A smile crept across her doughy face, lascivious and sly. Her teeth showed yellow behind maroon-red lips that reminded D'Alucci of raw beef liver. With alarm, he realized that her pudgy right hand had slipped across her lap and was squeezing his knee, now moving higher, furtively and insitently toward his crotch.