Is this a bad thesis statement?
The thesis I came up with is:
Money invested in most major professional sports is excessive and it would be better to use that money for other purposes.
I'm afraid that my topic seems to broad, is it?
And if it is could someone please give me an example of a good thesis statement about 'Money in Sports'
So should I make my thesis reflect more about what I'm talking about or is it fine like as it is?