Thesis statement? Bad or good?

Ok so this is supposedly my thesis statement ""Nature uplift the human spirit however people tends to ignore it but when they're lonely, they go back and appreciates the nature".. I don't know if it's bad or good. This thesis is for the I wandered lonely as a cloud poem by Wordsworth. I... show more Ok so this is supposedly my thesis statement ""Nature uplift the human spirit however people tends to ignore it but when they're lonely, they go back and appreciates the nature".. I don't know if it's bad or good. This thesis is for the I wandered lonely as a cloud poem by Wordsworth. I know that I already ask it but here I go again since some people in the other one ask what the essay is about. Tell me what you think or give me some ideas.. Thanks :)
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