Is this a good poem for garden lovers?
Be A Gardener
Where nothing matters
All the aspects of
The turn of seasons
Bugs and mites and
Wish and see
Have the confidence of
Tending for your
Tiny part of this world
Cry at little failures
A willing expert
Being a gardener is
The only way
Be - Become – Belong – Be
It's not my poem but I wish it was. I went chasing Bluebells on the net and found this and loved it.
- Tony BLv 71 decade agoFavourite answer
It's not terrific! It doesn't scan very well, and there is very little rhyme.
But having said that, those one-time essentials of poetry are not deemed important any more. You just need to spout off a load of deep sounding prose in three or four word lines, call it poetry, and hey presto! You are a poet. Poetry is devalued, like so many aspects of our lives these days. That's not a rant, and I'm not a grumpy old man. Promise!
- love*to*laughLv 51 decade ago
I thought that was beautiful....so...i went chasing Blue apples on the net and found this quote and though YOU would love it......
...The flowers of the apple tree are perhaps the most beautiful of any tree so copious and so delicious to both sight and sound....H. D Thoreau
- ausblueLv 71 decade ago
its lovely, im sure you can write one like that ...
i went chasing blue bells
can be part of a poem
blue apples too are pretty unique
just add to each line,
they dont have to rhyme
so on and so on
and whammy you have a poem!
- 1 decade ago
Its very long. But so good. Are you like some super genius poet? You should be a poet defently
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- 1 decade ago
Yes very good....