Could you please watch this video of my original song and let me know what you think of it?
I wrote it on a 13-hour-flight and recorded it quite literally as soon as I walked in the door to my house, so in the video I’m jet-lagged and physically and emotionally exhausted, so please don't judge my performance too harshly. I'm mainly interested in what you think of the lyrics and melody. I’d be grateful for any thoughts, constructive criticism or advice you may have. : )
This question was asked in late August but removed just before I had the opportunity to pick a best answer. Yesterday, nearly three months later, I received a message from Y!A Support apologizing for their error and informing me that the question had been reinstated. I hadn't realized it would become available to answer again. The link to the video has changed, so the past few answers have been commenting on a different song, but I appreciate their feedback anyway.
This is the song the question is about:
~peace : )