Writing to describe a journey plane,bus or car? What did you do how much time sepnd describing the Journey?
So how long did you spend actually describing the journey like the car bus or plane moving. I just described the bus for about a line or two blood red city bus then the interior and that was like a paragraph and for the next 1 and a half pages and a bit was the journey. Did you do that? Most ppl said they described the scenery too much like entering the plane the queues getting tickets and all that but that isnt part of the journey is it? Or am i wrong isnt the journey when take off plus. You could describe how it looked but only for a short time because it was a journey so you had to describe the journey.
Am i right or wrong? And did anyone do a bus Journey?