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AB asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Hello dear friends! I hope you like this one....?(pardon the yahoo format)?

if you were an ocean

i would set sail towrd your boundless horizon

weigh anchor and let your tides carry me away

explore distant shores unseen by others

and bask in your twilight at the end of each day

if you were a mountain

i’d pull myself up to your highest peak

breathe in the wind that has carved out your shape

with vision outstretched from your loftiest heights

embracing your deep blue in my greatest escape

if you were a star

i would traverse the distance of your celestial sea

to feel your warmth penetrate the deep cold of space

bathe in your glow, alive, warm and free

as your graceful orbit secures us in place

if you were the earth

i would plant in you a garden

and germinate the sweetest of flowers and vines

i'd water , and feed you with the utmost of care

an eternal beauty to weather the persistence of time

©A.Byers2007

(This one means allot to me and I am finally reeeeally happy with it the way it is...so I guess I am just sharing...be gentle..)

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I liked it. I especially like all of the imagery that you created. I could see everything you were talking about.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Well, I like it =D

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  • 1 decade ago

    i love it.

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