• Any advice on the story I'm writing? How would you make it end? Please answer back, I'll take into consideration every single answer?

    During 2 world war a 19 years old girl and a 23 yo guy flee from Soviet Union because the guy is wanted (he was falsely accused of smth) and the girl wants to start a new life (she was always mistreated in her family). During the journey she understand that she loves him, she gets sick with fever and he takes care... show more
    During 2 world war a 19 years old girl and a 23 yo guy flee from Soviet Union because the guy is wanted (he was falsely accused of smth) and the girl wants to start a new life (she was always mistreated in her family). During the journey she understand that she loves him, she gets sick with fever and he takes care of her like a brother. One day he makes a wooden sheep out of a piece of wood and he gives it to her. Later he gets sick (he almost dies) and this time the girl falls into despair because she doesnt want him to die. She warms him up and sleeps next to him the whole night. The morning after they wake up together, she tells him that she loves him and she cannot live without him, he tells her that she cannot do it out of despair, just because she's sad. He reveals that he's been to jail and if they catch him he's gonna end up dead (he tells her that she cannot make love to someone who was tortured in jail like he was). She cries and makes love to him because she doesnt want to lose him. They pass 2 days like this until the police comes in and finds them, takes away the boy and the girl disembarks alone and afraid in finland, because previously the guy had paid a man to let her cross the border freely. In Finland, she is hopeless, alone and she commits suicide jumping from a bridge. She wakes up in a hospital room and she finds next to her the wooden sheep. Then she finds out she's pregnant. A young doctor falls for her but she refuses him she wants to find the boy.
    4 answers · 18 hours ago
  • Does Donald Trump have explosive diarrhea?

    Best answer: That's just him talking, it's hard to tell the difference
    Best answer: That's just him talking, it's hard to tell the difference
    16 answers · 7 days ago
  • What do you think of this poem?

    Best answer: So sick of it after "The Affair" marathon last weekend.
    Best answer: So sick of it after "The Affair" marathon last weekend.
    6 answers · 4 days ago
  • I want to write poetry?

    But don't even know where to start or what to read.
    But don't even know where to start or what to read.
    9 answers · 6 days ago
  • Is there a way to fix the CD player in my car?

    Had a 6-disc changer in my car and it died last year. Bought another one, same model and everything. Installed it, put CDs in, and it takes them down into the changer, but it won't read them. I keep getting a 'no disc' error. It's connected correctly and all that jazz, but it won't read the... show more
    Had a 6-disc changer in my car and it died last year. Bought another one, same model and everything. Installed it, put CDs in, and it takes them down into the changer, but it won't read them. I keep getting a 'no disc' error. It's connected correctly and all that jazz, but it won't read the discs. The laser has been cleaned, but no luck. Any other thoughts/options?
    6 answers · 5 days ago
  • Moon shine anyone?

    9 answers · 1 week ago
  • Can a Dimeter poem be NOT iambic?

    4 answers · 5 days ago
  • Happy birthday cake anyone?

    Happy birthday cake anyone?

    Best answer: Happy Birthday!
    Best answer: Happy Birthday!
    10 answers · 1 week ago
  • C/C a tiny poem please?

    Pain In full bloom Bumblly bee finds it and returns to the hive to do his happy dance
    Pain In full bloom Bumblly bee finds it and returns to the hive to do his happy dance
    5 answers · 1 week ago
  • What do you think of my acroustic poem?

    Best answer: well done and you have hope to be a poet one day.
    Best answer: well done and you have hope to be a poet one day.
    7 answers · 2 weeks ago
  • Is the spelling correct in this poem, titled, "Where do you softly cry?"..?

    Where do you softly cry? When secretly asking why? Who hears the humblest sigh? If ever your heart feels it might die? What place exists? My mind resists! Can I make visits? Is it only within mists? Do you write it all down? Scribbling with a frown? Are Angels kissing your crown? Or do you openly cry in your town?
    Where do you softly cry? When secretly asking why? Who hears the humblest sigh? If ever your heart feels it might die? What place exists? My mind resists! Can I make visits? Is it only within mists? Do you write it all down? Scribbling with a frown? Are Angels kissing your crown? Or do you openly cry in your town?
    12 answers · 2 weeks ago
  • A poem for you to c/c?

    Justify i think of you and il never break your heart light to dark you got me in a heading drop add this add this to your game triple crown
    Justify i think of you and il never break your heart light to dark you got me in a heading drop add this add this to your game triple crown
    4 answers · 1 week ago
  • A poem to C/C please?

    LOVE It rained and it rained for days upon days gray skies falling like a curtain closing upon the worlds stage but barely a soul noticed a little plastic bottle removed from the table and kicked to the curb lieing face down in the gutter and crushed in the mud
    LOVE It rained and it rained for days upon days gray skies falling like a curtain closing upon the worlds stage but barely a soul noticed a little plastic bottle removed from the table and kicked to the curb lieing face down in the gutter and crushed in the mud
    4 answers · 1 week ago
  • Is this a good poem?

    Best answer: To me, it has more significance than the words themselves convey and
    I think, to many more.
    You have some choice phrases, well - considered
    and causing alarm outside of the incomprehensions I`ll wager,
    Yes, metaphors work here with an impact.
    8/ 10.
    Best answer: To me, it has more significance than the words themselves convey and
    I think, to many more.
    You have some choice phrases, well - considered
    and causing alarm outside of the incomprehensions I`ll wager,
    Yes, metaphors work here with an impact.
    8/ 10.
    13 answers · 2 weeks ago
  • Acrostic poem using the word Literature?

    i suck at writing poem and we have a homework for the subj world literature. someone please help me create an Acrostic poem
    i suck at writing poem and we have a homework for the subj world literature. someone please help me create an Acrostic poem
    5 answers · 2 weeks ago
  • Here is my second poem, what do you think?

    Dear Diary, with you, I am safe from inquiry To you, I entrust all my secrets, all my woes, and all my delights this also includes my ideas and frights You do not judge nor do you hold a grudge This is my first poem and it will be contained in this tome More poems will come but first I will have to get out of... show more
    Dear Diary, with you, I am safe from inquiry To you, I entrust all my secrets, all my woes, and all my delights this also includes my ideas and frights You do not judge nor do you hold a grudge This is my first poem and it will be contained in this tome More poems will come but first I will have to get out of this slum I am barefoot and in a blue hospital gown and I’m in a dangerous part of town I would tell you why I am dressed like this but I have to move now, as this place gives no time for bliss
    5 answers · 2 weeks ago
  • What business have I with pleasure?

    Time was when the moonlight soothed me. No more. This lovely light lights not me. All loveliness is anguish to me now. Damned most suddenly and malignantly. Damned in the midst of paradise. What business have I with pleasure? Any pleasure?
    Time was when the moonlight soothed me. No more. This lovely light lights not me. All loveliness is anguish to me now. Damned most suddenly and malignantly. Damned in the midst of paradise. What business have I with pleasure? Any pleasure?
    8 answers · 2 weeks ago