I need tips to make this better?
Over a metaphorical corridor
whores coarse and abnormal or
left tense by sores and more
bleed esteem and torture yours
Stepping back to the swording
pain of cataclysmic proportions
Proportioned to accord with subordinate
and abortioned souls of those
who with the rain stormed in
Cursing and slashing
blast through violent reactions
actin on abstractions
left dead due to miscalculated planning
a fault of the synapses
possibly another region
begin where you begot
where u forgive u may be forgot
BEFORE I SELF DESTRUCT?
DO YOU HONESTLY HATE 50 OR ARE U JUST TIRED OF CONSTANT UNDERACHIEVEMENT?
FROM THE SOUND OF THE FIRST SINGLE KANYE KNOCKED SOME SENSE INTO HIM
REMINDS ME OF SOMETHIN FROM GET RICH OR DIE TRYIN
I WOULD RATHER LISTEN TO 50 THAN WAYNE ANY DAY10 AnswersRap and Hip-Hop1 decade ago
IM IFFY ON THESE JOINTS
("IF YOU HATE" IS ON THOUGH)- 967 PLAYS BEFORE I RESET IT2 AnswersRap and Hip-Hop1 decade ago
on a mixtape but i don't like it
It was our first freestyle on a track
I'm the first and third verse
Production is terrible and I fell of beat like 3 times
SHOULD HE PUT IT ON?
I WANT VALID ANSWERS NOT I HATE THEM BECAUSE I CAN.1 AnswerRap and Hip-Hop1 decade ago
THE NEW G-UNIT MIXTAPE "ELEPHANT IN THE SAND" IS?!
THIS CAN'T BE THE SAME 50
EVEN YAYO KILLED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF HE DOES THIS ON "BEFORE I SELF DESTUCT" AND THE NEW G-UNIT ALBUM, HE MIGHT ACTUALLY DO SOME GOOD THINGS FOR HIP HOP.
THAT MIXTAPE IS FIRE
I DIDN'T KNOW HE COULD STILL DO THAT
THIS SONG IS FIRE
HE DID A SONG WITH THAT T-PAIN VOICE THING- LOL
HE'S AN IDIOT
P.S.- i'm not one of those 50 cent groupies, it's just that hot.14 AnswersRap and Hip-Hop1 decade ago