• Here is another poem, "That Beat Without Sound". Feedback Please?

    That beat has no sound but it is music That song is the devil’s own mischief That deafening symphony of silence To the future from the past in its presence That beat to the rhythm of my lonesome That song that tells me my old joy is done That music of life that never changes To the tune of the things that it erases That beat without... show more
    That beat has no sound but it is music That song is the devil’s own mischief That deafening symphony of silence To the future from the past in its presence That beat to the rhythm of my lonesome That song that tells me my old joy is done That music of life that never changes To the tune of the things that it erases That beat without sound reverberating That tune with the universe dancing That sound breaking us up in pieces To the world made of relics and traces That beat without sound that remains the same That song where the best things never remain That chorus that changes and love is gone To a tune that place heart when it's broken
    2 answers · Poetry · 1 decade ago
  • Feeling very depressed. Writing helps... how is this

    Will you come, Brother Kiss me now, oh coming Angel Let me wrap around your wings Let me bathe in silence soft To wash away my hurting soul I wish to see the end of ways The end of pain, the winter rays The glees and stares and hateful words I wish the end of all of this Let us fly away from this Please now, kiss, my tender... show more
    Will you come, Brother Kiss me now, oh coming Angel Let me wrap around your wings Let me bathe in silence soft To wash away my hurting soul I wish to see the end of ways The end of pain, the winter rays The glees and stares and hateful words I wish the end of all of this Let us fly away from this Please now, kiss, my tender lips Once what was will never more The pit is blue, an endless low For they have killed our sister Joy And who would really shed a tear Even think of me at all Would they lay a crimson rose Upon mine, a nameless stone So why should I stay in death When you can take my life away It's more of a song-- at least that was my intention. I'm not sure if you feel the rhythm ( which is choppy in places )
    7 answers · Poetry · 1 decade ago
  • What do you think of this freestyle Trigee?

    TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem. Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements. White woolly……………………………….......cotton ball, Polar... show more
    TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem. Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements. White woolly……………………………….......cotton ball, Polar bear………………..................Softly ballet across, Gripping sheets of…………...........................Pale blue, Icy hue……………………….....................Summer sky, hmm TD, Maybe Winter
    5 answers · Poetry · 1 decade ago
  • This really works?

    This is for all of you frustrated musicians...who want to turn all of us into frustrated listeners. ...You can play music on your phone by pressing the buttons on the top (1,2,3)...and along the side (6,9,#). But don't play the 4,5,7,8,*, or 0. They sound even worse than the others. Happy... show more
    This is for all of you frustrated musicians...who want to turn all of us into frustrated listeners. ...You can play music on your phone by pressing the buttons on the top (1,2,3)...and along the side (6,9,#). But don't play the 4,5,7,8,*, or 0. They sound even worse than the others. Happy Birthday 112163 112196 11#9632 969363 Auld Lang Syne 11113212 321139# #9331212 321##91 Frere Jacques 12311231 369369 9#9631,9#9631 191,191 Mary Had a Little Lamb 3212333 222,399 3212333 322321 Louie, Louie 111-66-999-66 Anyone know in a gada da vida?
    10 answers · Jokes & Riddles · 1 decade ago
  • Am I Made For Boxing?

    I am currently 16 just started boxing, i am 5ft.9", and weigh 119 pounds (8.5stone) my reach is 28 inches (71cm) I have just started and feel i would gain some weight with muscle as i'm pretty skinny. which weight class would i be in? and are my body stats good for someone my age and weight etc. to have a good have advantages in... show more
    I am currently 16 just started boxing, i am 5ft.9", and weigh 119 pounds (8.5stone) my reach is 28 inches (71cm) I have just started and feel i would gain some weight with muscle as i'm pretty skinny. which weight class would i be in? and are my body stats good for someone my age and weight etc. to have a good have advantages in fights? I doubt I will grow anymore maybe an inch but very little. any more info. needed i will glady supply it. Thanks. I am 1cm shorter in arm length than floyd mayweather jr. so no i dont have a short reach. it is 71CM. FLOYD IS 72CM i am measuring for my reach from my armpit to the end of my fist btw. and it is 71 inches i was getting confused trying to convert it for the boxing styles becuase im from england and we use the metric system lol.
    7 answers · Boxing · 1 decade ago
  • What would happen if we stopped using the words 'liberal' and 'conservative' ...?

    ... and had to re-think the way we describe politics? Is there really only two ways to think about it? What is the value in boiling complex decisions down into a simple dichotomies? Is too much energy spent on attacking the other side instead of promoting solutions that benefit us all?
    ... and had to re-think the way we describe politics? Is there really only two ways to think about it? What is the value in boiling complex decisions down into a simple dichotomies? Is too much energy spent on attacking the other side instead of promoting solutions that benefit us all?
    26 answers · Politics · 1 decade ago
  • My boyfriends mom doesnt like me. HELP?

    ok so me and my boyfriend have been dating since 6th grade(now 8th) and i really like him. he was my first kiss. and i really really like him. i dont think we will ever break up. but his mom absolutley HATES me. what should i do?!!! she wont let him go to the movies or mall with me and our other friends. should i dump him cuz of his mom? or just... show more
    ok so me and my boyfriend have been dating since 6th grade(now 8th) and i really like him. he was my first kiss. and i really really like him. i dont think we will ever break up. but his mom absolutley HATES me. what should i do?!!! she wont let him go to the movies or mall with me and our other friends. should i dump him cuz of his mom? or just ignore her? please help. lauren
    17 answers · Singles & Dating · 1 decade ago