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I found doing a car journey alright as i set it from a child's point of view and there were other people in the car. Not that i used them much. I mentioned the mother and father and wrote a paragraph on the older sister as it set the scene well. i described the scenery most, but i also used the repetition of field and dull atmosphere to show how boring the journey was. i also used a sighting of friends to show that the boy really did not want to be in the car.
I have never been on a plane so i could not really do that and i have frequently made long car journeys and i thought that i could put my own experiences into the writing even if the family were completely different to mine.
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- Best answer again Tessa your in luck 20pts in less than 2mins lol.